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1. What was easy for me ?

- English : These days, I 'm more comfortable to make conversation by using English than a week ago. It make me really happy.

- Life :In this semester, I'm learning yoga. I can do some yoga which helps me relax my body. I'm sharing it with my family.

2. What was difficult?

- English : Now, I'm learning how to make paragraph. It's difficult to relate main points and details.

- Life : I’ve written many resumes to get a job. Some companies want volunteers to introduce them in detail. Frankly, I can’t know how to express myself well.

3. What have I learned?
- English : In class, we’re making paragraph with many topics to get a skill to write essay. It’s so hard for me that I’ve worried about the middle exam.

- Life : I’m senior so I need to prepare to be a businessman. It’s a big burden to me. My parents get advice how to remove it. I’ve learned about dealing with stress effectively.

4.What do I need to improve?

- English : One year ago, I had learned English in the Philippines but I forget some English conversation skill. I want to remember it.

- Life : I will improve making out my schedule effectively. There are many information about the job. I want to miss it. I need to collect and process it well.

[h.w.] Descriptive paragraph

I have had a boy friend for six monthes. I introduce him to you. At first, He is in the master's course. His university is Seoul national university. His major is mechatronics. He studies about the engine. Then, he looks younger than his age. He has small eyes. He's wearing glasses. His nose is big. Lastly,When I have conversation with him, I used to find that our thought is similar. He is humorous. He makes people around him happy. I really want to keep good relationship with him.

final draft

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, people take many hours to commute. During rush hour, the public transportation system is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted makes acid rain. When people are exposed to acid rain, there are some possibilities to become baldhead. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. People need to think how to overcome these problems.

Changed paragraph by teachers

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, we take many hours to commute. During rush hour, the public transportation system is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted makes acid rain. When we are exposed to acid rain, it is bad effect to our hair. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. We need to think how to overcome these problems.

the first draft

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, we take many hours to commute. At rush hours, the public transport is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted make acid rain. When we are exposed to acid rain, it is bad effect to our hair. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. We need to think how to overcome these problems.

[homework3] the negative effects

1. traffic jam
a. time to commute
b. using public transportation

2. water pollution
a. sewage
b. using a detergent

3. trash
a. a shortage of a waste disposal
b. separate garbage collection

[homework2] p.9

1.What was easy for me?

- English : When I read some materials, I think it is easy for me. In my opinion, most Korean students are like me. They practice reading skills to pass the many kinds of exam.

- Life : I often cook cakes for people around me. I'm skillful in baking cakes because I learned it in my club. Sometimes, I forgot a recipe. But it's ok. The internet is the best teacher to me.

2. What was difficult?

- English : When I have some conversation with foreigner in speaking English, I'm so nervous.
My face chages red. I don't know how to overcome it. .

- Life : When I meet some people first, I 'm so shy. I know this matter exactly so I try to chage it. But it's difficult for me in my life. It' a bigger problem than I have others.

3. What have I learned?

-English : Nowadays, I study English to get a good grade in TOEIC. Most pepole should get a good grade in TOEIC to get a good job or to graduate from the university. I'll do my best.

-Life : I belive that the attitude is really important in our life. In modern society, there are many stress to people. To deal with many stress, the optimisic attitude is imperative.

4.What do I need to improve?

-English : The FREIND which is American sitcom is my favorite program. Every time I watch that, I want to speak English fluently like them. So I will practice to have a conversation many times.

- Life : I'm a seinor. So this semester is my last semester. I,nowadays, prepare to get a job.
It is hard to get a good job in Korea. I should have a competitive power to acheive it.

[homework] p.8

1. My mother has a really good character. she is always optimistic even though having some problems.

2. One of Sara's problems is her family situation. Her father became bankrupt because of IMF.
Thease days, she works part time job.

3. What happend was the wind blew the door shut. The sound was so loud that I was surprised.

4. Madrid is just wonderful, fantastic and amazing. As soon as I got to there, I want to live forever with my family.

5. I think there are many reasons to learn English such as communication and friendship. Moerover, in Korea , it is important to speak English fluently when getting a job.

6.It is true that opposites attract. As time goes by, they fall in love. They look so good now.