1. What was easy for me?
- English: These days, it’s easy for me to make essay than before. Actually, I had troubles to connect each idea. As a result to try to understand more and more, I can do it.
- Life: In this semester, I have a class to consultant problems each other. When I, first, was in this class, it’s difficult to share my problems with strangers. In contrast, I, as time passed by, have been calm to make conversation with group members.
2. What was difficult?
- English: I realized I'm nervous just when I must speak English in front of many people. I decide to make conversation with native people by using program in academy.
- Life: I have problems to arrange my schedule effectively. I,now,have many things to do. In this week, I have to prepare my middle exam and try to apply many companies. I'd better find ways by searching internet.
3. What have I learned?
-English: On Monday, we took exam to make an essay. I wrote it about merits to wear uniforms. I have too little time to think over it. However, I took efforts to make essay as learning.
-Life: I knew to deal with stress. My professor who has taught leadership said that 'attitude' is the most important factor in our life. I decide to be proactive in my life.
4. What do I need to improve?
-English: Teacher told we are going to learn how to present. I've worried about it. I think it's good to practice speaking English before started.
- Life: Actually, I used to sleep for many hours. It's difficult to decrease amount of hour to sleep even though I have many things to do.
2007년 10월 21일 일요일
paragraph
In 2007, more single men and women said they won't get married. Their parents never accept not to get married. Why parents want their sons and daughters to get married? Since the first people appeared on the earth, they've gotten married. Anyone didn't make them get married. It's instinct not to exterminate. It's also based on love. Through marriage, they've gotten babies. Babies do like parents. It becomes custom because getting married gives people good effects such as mental effects, economic effects and social effects.
What are good mental effects by getting marriage? They are making a partner, making a baby and making a family. What feelings do people get from their partners? Contrary to being worried about problems for themselves, they can solve all problems with their partner. Also, they are able to be delight together. My mother has shared all problems and feelings with my father. She said this fact give her delight in itself. One of the largest delights in the marriage is to get babies. Based on love, people get their sons and daughters. It's happy because of being only same to parents. As a result, they don't feel lonely. My father said his daughters and sons are the largest pleasure in his life. Through the babies, people can make own family. What means to make own family? It means leaving traces of people's thought in the world. Furthermore, they can get people to share their life. Korean ancestors give descendants their instruction from family to family. Moreover, families also share many things.
Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.
What do marriage has influence on the society? It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of families in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.
Getting marriage has three main good effects which are mental effects, economic effects and social effects. In philosophic study, the rate of people’s suicide is three times as much as married people. The body 1 tells you the reason. You find the answer to say the marriage is the biggest financial technology in life through the body 2. Can you know reasons why the government often builds up the campaign to recommends the marriage? You can find the answers as soon as reading the body 3. Finally, you know causes why most parents want their sons and daughters to get marriage. You are able to realize getting marriage is the most important custom for human being.
What are good mental effects by getting marriage? They are making a partner, making a baby and making a family. What feelings do people get from their partners? Contrary to being worried about problems for themselves, they can solve all problems with their partner. Also, they are able to be delight together. My mother has shared all problems and feelings with my father. She said this fact give her delight in itself. One of the largest delights in the marriage is to get babies. Based on love, people get their sons and daughters. It's happy because of being only same to parents. As a result, they don't feel lonely. My father said his daughters and sons are the largest pleasure in his life. Through the babies, people can make own family. What means to make own family? It means leaving traces of people's thought in the world. Furthermore, they can get people to share their life. Korean ancestors give descendants their instruction from family to family. Moreover, families also share many things.
Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.
What do marriage has influence on the society? It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of families in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.
Getting marriage has three main good effects which are mental effects, economic effects and social effects. In philosophic study, the rate of people’s suicide is three times as much as married people. The body 1 tells you the reason. You find the answer to say the marriage is the biggest financial technology in life through the body 2. Can you know reasons why the government often builds up the campaign to recommends the marriage? You can find the answers as soon as reading the body 3. Finally, you know causes why most parents want their sons and daughters to get marriage. You are able to realize getting marriage is the most important custom for human being.
conclusion
Getting marriage has three main good effects which are mental effects, economic effects and social effects. In philosophic study, the rate of people’s suicide is three times as much as married people. The body 1 tells you the reason. You find the answer to say the marriage is the biggest financial technology in life through the body 2. Can you know reasons why the government often builds up the campaign to recommends the marriage? You can find the answers as soon as reading the body 3. Finally, you know causes why most parents want their sons and daughters to get marriage. You are able to realize getting marriage is the most important custom for human being.
2007년 10월 15일 월요일
Body
What are good mental effects by getting marriage? They are making a partner, making a baby and making a family. What feelings do people get from their partners? Contrary to being worried about problems for themselves, they can solve all problems with their partner. Also, they are able to be delight together. My mother has shared all problems and feelings with my father. She said just this fact give her delight. One of the largest delights in the marriage is to get babies. Based on love, people get their sons and daughters. It's happy because of being only same to parents. As a result, they don't feel lonely. My father said his daughters and sons are the largest pleasure in his life. Through the babies, people can make own family. What means to make own family? It means leaving traces people's thought in the world. Furthermore, they can get people to share their life. Korean ancestors give descendants their instruction from family to family. Moreover, families also share many things.
Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.
Getting marriage has influence on the society. It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of family in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.
Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.
Getting marriage has influence on the society. It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of family in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.
2007년 10월 10일 수요일
Introduction
In 2007, more single men and women said they won't get married. Their parents never accept not to get married. Why parents want their sons and daughters to get married? Since the first people appeared on the earth, they've gotten married. Anyone didn't make them get married. It's instinct not to exterminate. It's also based on love. Through marriage, they've gotten babies. Babies do like parents. It become custom because getting married gives people good effects such as mental effects, economic effects and social effects.
2007년 10월 9일 화요일
Outline2
Topic : Getting marriage
Body 1 : Mental effects
a. making a partner
- solving problem together
- be delight with partner
- ex) my mother's words
- It is the largest delight to get babies.
b. making a baby
- delight because of being only same to parents
- not to loneliness
- ex) my father's word
- through babies, we can make own family
c. making a family
- leaving traces our thought
- sharing life
- ex) Korean ancestor
- families also share utilities
Body 2 : Economic effects
a. decreased expenses
- don't need to buy two things
- don't need to eat out anymore
- ex) date
- using decreased expenses, we can save money
b. saving money
- saving in same account
- making money together
- ex) friend gotten married early
- making economy to expand because of increased income and outcome
c. expanding economy
- getting man power
- The more man power is, the cheaper price is.
- ex) economic rule
- Getting man power also make good effects to other side.
Body 3 : Social effects
a. bringing up new generation
- solving problem of decreased birth rate
- not to exterminate
- ex) animal's instinct
- not only bring up new generation but also educate them
b. solving social problem
- decreasing the rate of young people's crimes
- decreasing the rate of young people's killing themselves
- ex) American studies
- Like above, family is good effect to country.
c. power of country
- The more families are, the stronger country is.
- The more families are, the bigger potential market is.
- ex) Chinese
- Country is based on families.
Body 1 : Mental effects
a. making a partner
- solving problem together
- be delight with partner
- ex) my mother's words
- It is the largest delight to get babies.
b. making a baby
- delight because of being only same to parents
- not to loneliness
- ex) my father's word
- through babies, we can make own family
c. making a family
- leaving traces our thought
- sharing life
- ex) Korean ancestor
- families also share utilities
Body 2 : Economic effects
a. decreased expenses
- don't need to buy two things
- don't need to eat out anymore
- ex) date
- using decreased expenses, we can save money
b. saving money
- saving in same account
- making money together
- ex) friend gotten married early
- making economy to expand because of increased income and outcome
c. expanding economy
- getting man power
- The more man power is, the cheaper price is.
- ex) economic rule
- Getting man power also make good effects to other side.
Body 3 : Social effects
a. bringing up new generation
- solving problem of decreased birth rate
- not to exterminate
- ex) animal's instinct
- not only bring up new generation but also educate them
b. solving social problem
- decreasing the rate of young people's crimes
- decreasing the rate of young people's killing themselves
- ex) American studies
- Like above, family is good effect to country.
c. power of country
- The more families are, the stronger country is.
- The more families are, the bigger potential market is.
- ex) Chinese
- Country is based on families.
2007년 10월 7일 일요일
Outline
Topic : Getting marriage
Thesis 1 : Mental effects
- a. making a partner
- b. making a baby
- c. making a family
Thesis 2 : Economic effects
- a. decreasing expenses
- b. saving money
- c. expanding economy
Thesis 3 : Social effects
-a. power of country
-b. solving social problem
-c. bringing up new generation
Thesis 1 : Mental effects
- a. making a partner
- b. making a baby
- c. making a family
Thesis 2 : Economic effects
- a. decreasing expenses
- b. saving money
- c. expanding economy
Thesis 3 : Social effects
-a. power of country
-b. solving social problem
-c. bringing up new generation
Brain storming
mental
- sharing delight, solving problem, removing loneliness, making baby, making good memory, making partner of life, making my family
social
- power of country, decreasing crimes, increasing population, baby, new generation, man power
economic
- decreasing wasted expense, living one house, saving money together, increasing expense to raise baby, expanding economy
- sharing delight, solving problem, removing loneliness, making baby, making good memory, making partner of life, making my family
social
- power of country, decreasing crimes, increasing population, baby, new generation, man power
economic
- decreasing wasted expense, living one house, saving money together, increasing expense to raise baby, expanding economy
2007년 10월 1일 월요일
[H.W.] p.27 Thesis
We need to try to reunify of North and South Korea. There are three good effects which are economic effects, political effects and social effects.
[H.W.] p.25 discussion
1.What is the longest composition you've ever written in English? How long was it?
- I've ever written a paragraph describing my boy friend. It's about 10 sentences.
2.How long did you work on it?
- It took a hour.
3.Why did you write it?
- Teacher gave us homework describing person around me. I thought over person whom I'll describe. I chose my boyfriend because I've, these days, spent a lot of hours with him.
4.What were some of the difficulties you had writing it?
- It's difficult that I ,detaily, explain him to my teacher.
- I've ever written a paragraph describing my boy friend. It's about 10 sentences.
2.How long did you work on it?
- It took a hour.
3.Why did you write it?
- Teacher gave us homework describing person around me. I thought over person whom I'll describe. I chose my boyfriend because I've, these days, spent a lot of hours with him.
4.What were some of the difficulties you had writing it?
- It's difficult that I ,detaily, explain him to my teacher.
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