2007년 11월 27일 화요일

Conclusion

I told you how to success in the blind meeting. You need to prepare meeting before starting it. You also concentrate meeting and make efforts to get in touch with some man. Now, you know the ways and have confidence in the blind meeting.

Body

We must prepare blind meeting before starting it. Ways to prepare it are making first impression good and emphasizing the womanly beauty. Have you ever heard importance of first impression? In psychology, they said most people decide other person’s everything just for about 10 seconds. For example, we wear perfume lightly and make up unlike usual. Don’t forget to be smile. Men think you are not same to men as soon as they smell at perfume and see your smile. Most men have fantasy from women’s university. We’d better emphasize feminine beauty. For instance, it’s important to wear like men. If you wear hip-hop pants, men can’t find difference with their friend. It’s good to choose skirt with bright color. You need to stress womanly beauty in the blind meeting like preparing it.

What will we do in the blind meeting? We must concentrate meeting and make ways to get in touch with one man. When it starts meeting, most men are interest in the prettiest woman. You must remember womanly beauty to get their interests from other woman. When you find men appealed, you have to concentrate his words and praise some behaviors. Moreover, you must be active to know his phone number. Some woman tends to wait until he gives his number to them. If a man does not do that, how can you get in touch with him? In my case, I miss many men because I was not brave. Don’t hesitate ask number to him.

Introduction

Do you know the reasons why your friend is more remarked in the blind meeting? You may be so sad because she is not much prettier than you. I’ll tell you about love. I got this information from my experience. I’m surprise to get very different results by reasons. Today, I’ll explain how to success in the blind meeting.

2007년 11월 18일 일요일

Presentation topic

1. Topic - Love

2. Thesis - How to success in the blind meeting

3. 15 pieces

remembering importance of first impression,
being smile,
to agree with partner's words,
being concentrate meeting, wearing bright clothes,
not to be comedian,
exchanging glances,
prasing partner in the concrete,
wearing perfume,
taking shower,
not to wear like man,
not to make a loud voice,
not to drink beer much,
not to express good feelings about partner overly,
making efforts to get partner's phone number,
not to stay there for long hours

2007년 10월 23일 화요일

p.36

1. What was easy for me?

- English: These days, it’s easy for me to make essay than before. Actually, I had troubles to connect each idea. As a result to try to understand more and more, I can do it.

- Life: In this semester, I have a class to consultant problems each other. When I, first, was in this class, it’s difficult to share my problems with strangers. In contrast, I, as time passed by, have been calm to make conversation with group members.

2. What was difficult?

- English: I realized I'm nervous just when I must speak English in front of many people. I decide to make conversation with native people by using program in academy.

- Life: I have problems to arrange my schedule effectively. I,now,have many things to do. In this week, I have to prepare my middle exam and try to apply many companies. I'd better find ways by searching internet.

3. What have I learned?

-English: On Monday, we took exam to make an essay. I wrote it about merits to wear uniforms. I have too little time to think over it. However, I took efforts to make essay as learning.

-Life: I knew to deal with stress. My professor who has taught leadership said that 'attitude' is the most important factor in our life. I decide to be proactive in my life.

4. What do I need to improve?

-English: Teacher told we are going to learn how to present. I've worried about it. I think it's good to practice speaking English before started.

- Life: Actually, I used to sleep for many hours. It's difficult to decrease amount of hour to sleep even though I have many things to do.

2007년 10월 21일 일요일

paragraph

In 2007, more single men and women said they won't get married. Their parents never accept not to get married. Why parents want their sons and daughters to get married? Since the first people appeared on the earth, they've gotten married. Anyone didn't make them get married. It's instinct not to exterminate. It's also based on love. Through marriage, they've gotten babies. Babies do like parents. It becomes custom because getting married gives people good effects such as mental effects, economic effects and social effects.

What are good mental effects by getting marriage? They are making a partner, making a baby and making a family. What feelings do people get from their partners? Contrary to being worried about problems for themselves, they can solve all problems with their partner. Also, they are able to be delight together. My mother has shared all problems and feelings with my father. She said this fact give her delight in itself. One of the largest delights in the marriage is to get babies. Based on love, people get their sons and daughters. It's happy because of being only same to parents. As a result, they don't feel lonely. My father said his daughters and sons are the largest pleasure in his life. Through the babies, people can make own family. What means to make own family? It means leaving traces of people's thought in the world. Furthermore, they can get people to share their life. Korean ancestors give descendants their instruction from family to family. Moreover, families also share many things.
Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.
What do marriage has influence on the society? It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of families in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.

Getting marriage has three main good effects which are mental effects, economic effects and social effects. In philosophic study, the rate of people’s suicide is three times as much as married people. The body 1 tells you the reason. You find the answer to say the marriage is the biggest financial technology in life through the body 2. Can you know reasons why the government often builds up the campaign to recommends the marriage? You can find the answers as soon as reading the body 3. Finally, you know causes why most parents want their sons and daughters to get marriage. You are able to realize getting marriage is the most important custom for human being.

conclusion

Getting marriage has three main good effects which are mental effects, economic effects and social effects. In philosophic study, the rate of people’s suicide is three times as much as married people. The body 1 tells you the reason. You find the answer to say the marriage is the biggest financial technology in life through the body 2. Can you know reasons why the government often builds up the campaign to recommends the marriage? You can find the answers as soon as reading the body 3. Finally, you know causes why most parents want their sons and daughters to get marriage. You are able to realize getting marriage is the most important custom for human being.

2007년 10월 15일 월요일

Body

What are good mental effects by getting marriage? They are making a partner, making a baby and making a family. What feelings do people get from their partners? Contrary to being worried about problems for themselves, they can solve all problems with their partner. Also, they are able to be delight together. My mother has shared all problems and feelings with my father. She said just this fact give her delight. One of the largest delights in the marriage is to get babies. Based on love, people get their sons and daughters. It's happy because of being only same to parents. As a result, they don't feel lonely. My father said his daughters and sons are the largest pleasure in his life. Through the babies, people can make own family. What means to make own family? It means leaving traces people's thought in the world. Furthermore, they can get people to share their life. Korean ancestors give descendants their instruction from family to family. Moreover, families also share many things.

Getting marriage makes economic effects. It can decrease expenses, save money and expand economy. How can married people decrease expenses? They don't need to buy two things. They don't need to eat out anymore. When single man and woman are out on a date, they waste much money to eat out. Consequently, married people can save money by using decreased expenses. They can save money due to many reasons. They save money in same account. They make money together. For example, my friend gotten married early can save money twice as much as other single friend. Families make economy to expand since increasing income and outcome. How does marriage contribute to expand economy? The society can get more manpower by increasing the number of marriage. The more manpower is, the cheaper price is. In the principle of economics, the shortage of labor means rising in price. In addition, getting manpower makes good effects to other side.

Getting marriage has influence on the society. It can bring up new generation and solve the problems. Besides, it’s power of country. What does bring up new generation mean? It’s able to solve the problem of decreased birth rate. It’s the source for human beings not to exterminate. For instance, female animal, according to instinct, choose the strongest male animal to protect their family. Marriage can solve a variety of social problems. It exercises the influence to decrease the rate of juvenile crime. It can decrease the rate of juvenile suicide. In American study, young people who have single-parent family commit crimes more than people who have parents. Thus, family is good effect to country. Why does getting marriage mean power of country? When people get marriage, they make a home. The more families are, the stronger country is. The more families are, the bigger potential market is. China has the most number of family in the world. Most experts believe China will be the strongest in the world. Therefore, we can say country is based on families.

2007년 10월 10일 수요일

Introduction

In 2007, more single men and women said they won't get married. Their parents never accept not to get married. Why parents want their sons and daughters to get married? Since the first people appeared on the earth, they've gotten married. Anyone didn't make them get married. It's instinct not to exterminate. It's also based on love. Through marriage, they've gotten babies. Babies do like parents. It become custom because getting married gives people good effects such as mental effects, economic effects and social effects.

2007년 10월 9일 화요일

Outline2

Topic : Getting marriage

Body 1 : Mental effects

a. making a partner
- solving problem together
- be delight with partner
- ex) my mother's words
- It is the largest delight to get babies.

b. making a baby
- delight because of being only same to parents
- not to loneliness
- ex) my father's word
- through babies, we can make own family

c. making a family
- leaving traces our thought
- sharing life
- ex) Korean ancestor
- families also share utilities

Body 2 : Economic effects

a. decreased expenses
- don't need to buy two things
- don't need to eat out anymore
- ex) date
- using decreased expenses, we can save money

b. saving money
- saving in same account
- making money together
- ex) friend gotten married early
- making economy to expand because of increased income and outcome

c. expanding economy
- getting man power
- The more man power is, the cheaper price is.
- ex) economic rule
- Getting man power also make good effects to other side.

Body 3 : Social effects

a. bringing up new generation
- solving problem of decreased birth rate
- not to exterminate
- ex) animal's instinct
- not only bring up new generation but also educate them

b. solving social problem
- decreasing the rate of young people's crimes
- decreasing the rate of young people's killing themselves
- ex) American studies
- Like above, family is good effect to country.

c. power of country
- The more families are, the stronger country is.
- The more families are, the bigger potential market is.
- ex) Chinese
- Country is based on families.

2007년 10월 7일 일요일

Outline

Topic : Getting marriage

Thesis 1 : Mental effects
- a. making a partner
- b. making a baby
- c. making a family

Thesis 2 : Economic effects
- a. decreasing expenses
- b. saving money
- c. expanding economy

Thesis 3 : Social effects
-a. power of country
-b. solving social problem
-c. bringing up new generation

Thesis

-mental effects

-economic effects

-social effects

Brain storming

mental
- sharing delight, solving problem, removing loneliness, making baby, making good memory, making partner of life, making my family

social
- power of country, decreasing crimes, increasing population, baby, new generation, man power

economic
- decreasing wasted expense, living one house, saving money together, increasing expense to raise baby, expanding economy

Topic

The topic is 'Getting marriage'.

2007년 10월 1일 월요일

[H.W.] p.27 Thesis

We need to try to reunify of North and South Korea. There are three good effects which are economic effects, political effects and social effects.

[H.W.] p.25 discussion

1.What is the longest composition you've ever written in English? How long was it?

- I've ever written a paragraph describing my boy friend. It's about 10 sentences.

2.How long did you work on it?

- It took a hour.

3.Why did you write it?

- Teacher gave us homework describing person around me. I thought over person whom I'll describe. I chose my boyfriend because I've, these days, spent a lot of hours with him.

4.What were some of the difficulties you had writing it?

- It's difficult that I ,detaily, explain him to my teacher.

2007년 9월 27일 목요일

[h.w.] page 29

1. What was easy for me ?

- English : These days, I 'm more comfortable to make conversation by using English than a week ago. It make me really happy.

- Life :In this semester, I'm learning yoga. I can do some yoga which helps me relax my body. I'm sharing it with my family.

2. What was difficult?

- English : Now, I'm learning how to make paragraph. It's difficult to relate main points and details.

- Life : I’ve written many resumes to get a job. Some companies want volunteers to introduce them in detail. Frankly, I can’t know how to express myself well.

3. What have I learned?
- English : In class, we’re making paragraph with many topics to get a skill to write essay. It’s so hard for me that I’ve worried about the middle exam.

- Life : I’m senior so I need to prepare to be a businessman. It’s a big burden to me. My parents get advice how to remove it. I’ve learned about dealing with stress effectively.

4.What do I need to improve?

- English : One year ago, I had learned English in the Philippines but I forget some English conversation skill. I want to remember it.

- Life : I will improve making out my schedule effectively. There are many information about the job. I want to miss it. I need to collect and process it well.

[h.w.] Descriptive paragraph


I have had a boy friend for six monthes. I introduce him to you. At first, He is in the master's course. His university is Seoul national university. His major is mechatronics. He studies about the engine. Then, he looks younger than his age. He has small eyes. He's wearing glasses. His nose is big. Lastly,When I have conversation with him, I used to find that our thought is similar. He is humorous. He makes people around him happy. I really want to keep good relationship with him.

2007년 9월 17일 월요일

final draft

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, people take many hours to commute. During rush hour, the public transportation system is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted makes acid rain. When people are exposed to acid rain, there are some possibilities to become baldhead. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. People need to think how to overcome these problems.

Changed paragraph by teachers

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, we take many hours to commute. During rush hour, the public transportation system is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted makes acid rain. When we are exposed to acid rain, it is bad effect to our hair. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. We need to think how to overcome these problems.

2007년 9월 16일 일요일

the first draft

The large population of Seoul has lead to several negative effects. At first, there is traffic jam. In every morning, we take many hours to commute. At rush hours, the public transport is crowded. Then this matter causes the air pollution. It’s difficult to breath in and out because of dirty air. There are many patients who have bronchial trouble. Finally the air polluted make acid rain. When we are exposed to acid rain, it is bad effect to our hair. The acid rain also makes pollution to the underground water. We need to think how to overcome these problems.

2007년 9월 11일 화요일

[homework3] the negative effects

1. traffic jam
a. time to commute
b. using public transportation

2. water pollution
a. sewage
b. using a detergent

3. trash
a. a shortage of a waste disposal
b. separate garbage collection

2007년 9월 9일 일요일

[homework2] p.9

1.What was easy for me?

- English : When I read some materials, I think it is easy for me. In my opinion, most Korean students are like me. They practice reading skills to pass the many kinds of exam.

- Life : I often cook cakes for people around me. I'm skillful in baking cakes because I learned it in my club. Sometimes, I forgot a recipe. But it's ok. The internet is the best teacher to me.

2. What was difficult?

- English : When I have some conversation with foreigner in speaking English, I'm so nervous.
My face chages red. I don't know how to overcome it. .

- Life : When I meet some people first, I 'm so shy. I know this matter exactly so I try to chage it. But it's difficult for me in my life. It' a bigger problem than I have others.

3. What have I learned?

-English : Nowadays, I study English to get a good grade in TOEIC. Most pepole should get a good grade in TOEIC to get a good job or to graduate from the university. I'll do my best.

-Life : I belive that the attitude is really important in our life. In modern society, there are many stress to people. To deal with many stress, the optimisic attitude is imperative.

4.What do I need to improve?

-English : The FREIND which is American sitcom is my favorite program. Every time I watch that, I want to speak English fluently like them. So I will practice to have a conversation many times.

- Life : I'm a seinor. So this semester is my last semester. I,nowadays, prepare to get a job.
It is hard to get a good job in Korea. I should have a competitive power to acheive it.

[homework] p.8

1. My mother has a really good character. she is always optimistic even though having some problems.

2. One of Sara's problems is her family situation. Her father became bankrupt because of IMF.
Thease days, she works part time job.

3. What happend was the wind blew the door shut. The sound was so loud that I was surprised.

4. Madrid is just wonderful, fantastic and amazing. As soon as I got to there, I want to live forever with my family.

5. I think there are many reasons to learn English such as communication and friendship. Moerover, in Korea , it is important to speak English fluently when getting a job.

6.It is true that opposites attract. As time goes by, they fall in love. They look so good now.